Friday, October 14, 2011

Feedback to Our Pitch

Feedback from Peers
We recieved much positive feedback from our classmates. We were asked however to be more clear with our narritive idea. However, we believe as our video is concept based a clear narrative is not entirely necassary yet would add another element of story to the video.

As well as feedback we were also othered an alternate ending which was very helpful as at first we had struggled with how to end the video.


Feedback from Teachers
The overall concept of our video was approved and we recieved lots of feedback comending the imaginative ideas we intend to feature within our video. However, there were concerns that the only female muscisian would not feature within the video as she would be dressed as one of the villains, more specifically 'Darth Vader', this was an issue as the actress would have to wear the iconic mask and a large outfit; this would obscure her gender leading people to assume the person in the suit is male.

This becomes an issue as traditionally it would be considered sexist or perhaps detremental to the bands success in a male audience if the female muscisian were hidden.


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